Great idea!

There are some overexposed areas which are distracting. Try this with a more gentle light condition.

I think it will be stronger if you crop it so that the bridge and girl will be off center.

I needs also a minor straighening.

nice shot i agree moserArtist Comment ! +8

Its a bit blurry and the mention made above relating to the over exposure i agree with - but the "crop off center" im not sure I agree with.

Thanks alot guys.
Ah, I noticed alot was overexposed.
I'm using a Sony Cyb ershot DSC W50, and I'm tryin to get the hang of it still. lol
Thanks though!
I'm going to try and take this again with less overexposure.

• ACT

Yes that is her! pretty good classic perspective, and the girl adds a bit more intrest to the shot. Best advice I can give you is to keep experimenting, take atleast 10 photos of the same subject with diffrent perspectives, and see what you get.
Wes

all been said...

Nice concept!
Nothing I can add that hasn't been said. Great shot.

A little overexposed but very nice perspective and sensation of loneliness!
Post just one a day....many people only see the last one!
And you can post only 6 works a month!
Carlos

Yah i realized that theres a limit to submissions on a month, but its already the end of the month closing in, so I figured Id get them all out for now.

• ACT

I like your perspective and her pose.
You should try this shot another time. Dusk or dawn, when the sun is still low and the shadows long. I think this would look quite cool here.
Keep experimenting!
You have cool ideas, that need a little more skilled routine.